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Heart upbeat, to the bliss rhythm Searing, benign rapture At play within our body prism Joy, thoughts cannot capture Childlike trust makes no fuss We go where God takes us Ecstasy; here, now, thus Bliss replete Heart upbeat 24-November-2021 Quietus

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Date: 11/24/2021 11:07:00 PM
These two lines resonate with me " Childlike trust makes no fuss We go where God takes us"
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Date: 11/24/2021 11:53:00 PM
Exactly. We need to get out of our own way, so to speak
Date: 11/24/2021 11:50:00 AM
Loved this quietus. Indeed we go where God takes us.
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Date: 11/24/2021 6:40:00 PM
Thank you Victor! :)

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