Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Heart Upbeat

Heart upbeat, to the bliss rhythm
Searing, benign rapture
At play within our body prism 
Joy, thoughts cannot capture

Childlike trust makes no fuss
We go where God takes us
Ecstasy; here, now, thus 

Bliss replete
Heart upbeat

24-November-2021
Quietus 

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Caren Krutsinger November 24, 2021 at 11:07 PM These two lines resonate with me " Childlike trust makes no fuss We go where God takes us" Unseeking Seeker November 24, 2021 at 11:53 PM Exactly. We need to get out of our own way, so to speak

Victor Buhagiar November 24, 2021 at 11:50 AM Loved this quietus. Indeed we go where God takes us. Unseeking Seeker November 24, 2021 at 6:40 PM Thank you Victor! :)