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Heart Unfolds

heart unfolds flower
pick the petals make a wish
forever today

flowerhaiku

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

November 23, 2015 at 3:49 PM

Haiku is one of my favorite forms. Short and sweet as perfumed flowers.

D.W. Rodgers

November 23, 2015 at 4:17 PM

Thanks Iris, enjoy your thanksgiving too.

Mr Gautam

November 22, 2015 at 8:41 PM

Amazing Haiku ! :)

D.W. Rodgers

November 23, 2015 at 2:00 PM

Thanks Gautam

Poet Destroyer A

September 3, 2015 at 11:14 AM

this reminds me of picking petals saying "he loves me, he loves me not" :)

D.W. Rodgers

September 4, 2015 at 7:33 AM

Thanks Linda, yes it flows from the first line.

Skat A

August 11, 2015 at 2:31 AM

Lovely, haiku

D.W. Rodgers

August 11, 2015 at 8:19 AM

Thanks Skat, your visits are always welcome..

Andrea Dietrich

August 2, 2015 at 4:30 PM

oh, this is really lovely!!

D.W. Rodgers

August 11, 2015 at 8:18 AM

Thanks Andrea, your comments ar always greatly appreciated, especially the positive ones.

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