Heart Strum

moved by the music heart jumped with the melody sang with harmony

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Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 9/26/2014 7:33:00 PM

What a beautiful and moving haiku....wonderful write :) Ana

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/11/2014 11:14:00 AM

Warm welcome to poetrysoup..:) been here just for 2years and I learned allot from here.. Enjoying the community and family too..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2014 8:53:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Shan - I choose your first lovely haiku poem - I love Haiku - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/28/2014 6:24:00 PM

WOW! Hi Shan, this is such a beautiful Haiku! I love it! Well done. I wish you a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings. Pandita

Skat A

Date: 8/27/2014 8:12:00 PM

Hi Shan, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Shan Vitor
Date: 9/4/2014 4:48:00 AM

sure :) thanks for the welcome :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/27/2014 9:29:00 AM

Shan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"