Heart Stops

Heart stops Tick Tock, Tick.....Tock I hold my breath and wait But you refuse to catch my eye Heart breaks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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K. Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 5:54 AM
ouchy-- heartbreaking indeed! Emma-- very effective write you have here-- :)
Castro Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 7:52 AM
wooooo i felt my heart ;)
Castro Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 7:52 AM
7up
Aul Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Great write..........George
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 3:22 PM
I like the rhyming way you did this cute cinquain, Emma.
Devonshire Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 2:56 PM
So many people, both men and women, watch and wait longingly as you describe so well, Emma. I hope you find one who returns your affection without forcing you to wait for heartache. Insightful poem! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 1:52 PM
lovely cinquain on the heart break, Emma
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