Heart Slowly Beating

Your love has blinded me, can not see what really surrounds me.
Confused, with thoughts of you rushing in my mind.
Broken pieces of a vase, shattered, as the pieces of my heart,
not easily to amend....
Feels like water raising up, hard for me to breathe, heart slowly beating,
everything going blank...hard for me to focus, hard for me to think.
Your love has blided me, can not see what really surrounds me.
Confused, with thoughts of you rushing in my mind...
heart slowly beating....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 25, 2011 at 4:28 AM
Sounds like someone is about to die. I hope it is not you Barbara. Love is a hard lesson to learn, but once learned things get better. Welcome to P.S..
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