Heart Shattered - Itty Bitty

Heart Shattered- Itty Bitty

As the sunset beyond a hill
Heart is shattered, nothing I feel
What is broken, can time mend
Where to start, how do I begin
And if night is darkest before dawn
Can it be true joy comes in the morn
Bluebirds will hum, and flowers will bloom
Again I’ll find love, don't have to be soon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 31, 2015 at 10:04 AM
PATRICIA , Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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May 26, 2014 at 2:01 PM
Hi Patricia, Belated congrats on your poem, hope you find love again, blessings, Carl
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April 20, 2014 at 12:41 PM
Patricia, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. Happy Easter, luv LINDA
Callus Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 6:19 AM
This is beautiful Patricia; must give it a high rating :) // congrats on win :) // paul
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April 19, 2014 at 1:15 AM
Patricia this is a heartfelt suberb write,, Congrats on wonderful win !
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 12:53 AM
Congratulations on this little gem's win in Andrea's contest Patricia!
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 11:56 PM
this is a very feeling poem and I thank you for entering my contest. Congrats for your win.
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April 15, 2014 at 10:40 AM
A heart felt write indeed...lovely rhyme!
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April 14, 2014 at 5:52 PM
I can really relate to the feelings that you expressed here. Your poem is very beautiful in it's simplicity. Well done, Patricia! Good luck in the contest!...Welcome to Poetry Soup!...Thank you so much for the kind comments on my poem. :)
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