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Heart Questions Love

My house is but a heart of shattered glass With broken crystals that carpet the floor Un-furnished bronze and cracks of damaged brass Disease the dining of my hearts decor A heart once healthy love held to adore Of that fine drum-line...spirited and free That danced to beat now drifts depressed in me Awaiting for loves donor to revive Yet my ship sank in loves seductive sea Heart questions love...which lover shall arrive?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/13/2011 8:47:00 PM
a lyrical metaphorical verse here.I think you did quite well for the contest, my friend. I"ve been too busy to get here for a while. NIce seeing this one!
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Date: 9/13/2011 7:21:00 PM
Always have hope. I like how you ended this on a good note. Thanks!
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Date: 9/11/2011 6:46:00 PM
Dear Johnny, do poets write about their own experiences? I guess at one time or another we all have had hearts shattered. Love the emotion and deep feeling you express here. and your visits give me such a high which I probably don't deserve but are so special. Thanks.
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