Heart Pleading

hearts looking for love
sent only from above
mind goes on living
heart goes on dieing

I'll keep on dreaming
I'll keep on thriving
whats the point of living
when nothings shining

I'm full of giving
I'm full of crying
this mess feeling
keeps on blinding

tired of believing
tired of trying
wanting love
needing feeling

insides begging 
theres no dealing
needing that one
wanting ,but none

gift from heaven
pure love
amen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/24/2010 6:20:00 AM
go back before september and read my poetry and you'll find the love your looking for. this is very good by the way.this in many ways tell my story. but in september it ended. john h loving iii
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Date: 11/22/2010 10:04:00 PM
ah, jennifer. keep praying and you might snag a "joe" like me. (and then you might be praying for something different.) hahaha. Glad my story made you laugh! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/22/2010 1:11:00 PM
Very creative and interesting write on heart pleading, jennifer
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Date: 11/22/2010 1:07:00 PM
Smile ~ "Pure 'Love;' Very Beautiful Thought & Painting My Dear" ~ I have my own pictures given amid time in regards unto "Love" but, beautiful hearts & beautiful souls are the best reflection I would say &, "Yours Seems Very Lovely" so, don't Ever let go ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day My Dear, Amid 'The Soft Embrace of, Beautiful Love;'" Bye!:) ~
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