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Heart On Display

Now that I put my heart on display Please oh please don't make me put it away Walls so high it hid behind Always afraid of what it might find Now it's seeing bright sunlight Wondering why it was locked up so tight Feeling the warmth of the sun Now it knows life has just begun So please oh please don't make me put it away Now that I put my heart on display

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/27/2016 2:27:00 PM

Welcome to PS Christine, love your rhyme here, really sucks you in. Well penned!

Christine Saputo
Date: 3/27/2016 3:16:00 PM

Thanks for taking the time to read my poem and commenting. Glad you enjoyed it! Have found posting my poems here very freeing!

Skat A

Date: 3/19/2016 12:19:00 AM

Christine Saputo, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Christine Saputo
Date: 3/21/2016 3:02:00 PM

Thanks for welcoming me. Hope you enjoy what I post here.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2016 9:12:00 PM

Christine S, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about you're poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. You're New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Christine Saputo
Date: 3/17/2016 1:13:00 PM

Thanks for welcoming me. I hope whatever I post will be enjoyed by some and maybe even inspire.