Heart of Pain

heart of pain , words of sorrow, been there mate, no tomorrow, get back on the horse, yes that's right, walk tall babe, through the lonely night! get some strength, just steal or borrow:) it's alright.... thanks Brenda...Don Brian Strand Contest Name IMAGE any image theme/any form 2-14 lines |
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Date: 1/1/2012 9:43:00 PM
thanks i needed that...
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Date: 1/1/2012 3:51:00 PM
good advise Don said with with yur usual talent. Big Hug lizzie
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Date: 12/29/2011 2:20:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like one Brian will like..Thanks for stopping by my "Spellbinding Love"...Sara
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Date: 12/29/2011 1:18:00 PM
And yet it still stabs.
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Date: 12/28/2011 10:00:00 PM
great rhyme Don
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Date: 12/28/2011 10:00:00 PM
What a fantastic write here Don! Ah yes, I know all about the heart of pain, I feel I carry it all the time...it can be burdensome! I try to get back on the horse but I get kicked right back off! Horses just don't like me I guess! Wonderful Work!!
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Date: 12/28/2011 10:20:00 PM
act the part of the other bugger, be the different one, not the tree hugger, program the words 2 come from mouth, and let him loose, an actor grouse, cos he is somethin else, a winner who can belch, no doubt...
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