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Heart of Mine

A dangerous job 
Shafted as hearts collapse in
Into energy bleed

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Sara Kendrick

August 8, 2012 at 12:01 PM

Interesting Haiku..Soup Mail for you soon..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 9, 2012 at 12:48 PM

I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Tim. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

April 29, 2012 at 9:53 PM

Why, Thank you Tim.. falling is very easy.. finding a bandage big enough to cover up the dangerous job..is the hard part. Energy and life will always flow like like undying blood... a wonderful instrument we have... called "HEART!" a very interesting haiku... thank you always.. xox.... LINDA...