Carmael William Poet Triolet

Heart of Mine

Oh gracious heart of mine,
How perilous art thee, 
On thoughts of obligation u dine, 
Oh gracious heart of mine, 
You never say 'no' or whine, 
Nor doth from worries you flee, 
Oh gracious heart of mine, 
How perilous art thee. 



12/11/20
Graciousness Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani

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Eve Roper November 17, 2020 at 11:12 AM Carmael, love the way you shaped the triolet form, and place your deep emotions to it. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Silent One November 12, 2020 at 8:48 AM I think many will relate.. You did the form very well.. Carmael William November 13, 2020 at 1:16 AM Thank you.. Love sophia