Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes:  "Heart of Eternal Beauty" is a co-authored Verse write by Liam McDaid and me. It is an allegorical and spiritual tale touching on hope, love, and eternal promise as reflected in a divine love and relationship between a man and woman. We both tried to show here the combined "oneness" in this relationship and the ethereal connection to God. Enjoy this write!! (Note: This poem was originally completed on July 27, 2015.) (Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid - July 28, 2015) (Verse)

Categories: allegory, emotions, faith, feelings, love, romantic and spiritual.

 

 

Heart of Eternal Beauty

Heart of Eternal Beauty

A flame burns in the heart of eternal beauty
As one doorway opens calling out to the future
Consuming deeply your love smoking very hot 
Faith upon this earth burns through these veins 
Hope knows no bounds or earthly limitations
Stand with me now love on the seventh wave 
As you rise to the highest peaks of true eternity 
So graciously kneeling with the knowledge of
An intoxicating and priceless cosmic jewel 
Chained inside a bond kissing heaven above 
As links hold our emotions in a circle of light 
As gifted feelings combine together to unite 
Our hearts and souls in God’s precious light

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem,
Copyright © All Rights Reserved (July 27, 2015) (Verse)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Onclaud Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 3:27 PM
divine kind of love and a spiritual experience.. certainly a superb collab; i can't tell which one wrote the lines.. huggs
Bateman Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 4:03 PM
We both actually wrote the lines Nette!! Thanks for your note. These poems actually go through a pretty rigorous review process with both of of us working on them. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
Nayak Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 7:13 AM
Hello my poet friends, This poem is awesome! It ignites the spiritual side of love based on trust and true love!!! It's a divine and sacred love transcending from all earthly love....i loved reading it ! Thanks for sharing
Bateman Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 2:55 PM
AN!! Thanks so much for your most wonderful note. I must get by to check out your latest poetry. I know that Liam and I are quite pleased that you enjoyed our mutual write!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 3:54 AM
- Gary and Liam, beautiful written - I love it - I do not know how many words we can use to describe our love ..... but there are many ways .... and it's always beautifully - A crystal clear 7 - I wish you a wonderful day, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 4:00 PM
Thanks "D" so much!! We are very happy with this particular result!! And the 7+++ is indeed quite wonderful. Cheers and Best "D" -- G!!
Bateman Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 2:50 PM
He's been gone the last couple of days which is why I went ahead and posted this poem. Normally, we both alternate posting the co-writes. I will try to call him this evening Anne-Lise. I look forward to our next three-way poem write! Take Care!! Cheers, Gary
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 5:09 AM
- Where is Liam ..... I see him so rarely (?)
Bateman Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 5:06 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise Dear One!! And thanks for the TR!! Love is always that emotion we all work to define. I went ahead and posted this one since I think Liam was delayed. (We normally alternate our posts.) Be sure to check out my new sonnet: "The Tides of Our Passion." I posted it too earlier today. Cheers and Best!! Gary
Petersen Potter Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 2:40 AM
Hi Gary n' Liam!A very beautiful romantic, dreamy,captivating and sweet love poem penned by you my dearest friends.A most beautiful passionate romantic sweet and enchanting love piece to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.Just dazzling!Very beautifully written.I love it!Great imagery!Just awesome!Wonderful collaboration!So very beautiful! I truly enjoyed it.A 7+++ to each + Fav!Your pens are truly mighty golden.Wishing you a very lovely week!Keep your Faith Liam!In his light!God bless you always!Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Bateman Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 6:12 PM
Thanks "D" so much!! We are very happy with this particular result!! And the 7+++ is indeed quite wonderful. Cheers and Best "D" -- G!!
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