Heart Lotus

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Hark oh hermit, to the sound of silence Emanating from divine heart lotus All encompassing love of innocence Rapture radiation continuous Tremors of bliss therein fortuitous Lustrous currents of magnetism divine Outpour from heart lotus, as God assigns Teleporting presence to His domain Upstaging ego; nodes within align Suffusing us with love, cleansing all stains 20-May-2021 (Acrostic Dizain)

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/21/2021 2:11:00 AM

It's been ages since I wrote a dizain, never an acrostic though. Loved you poem though.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/20/2021 8:10:00 PM

What great Acrostic and delectable words tremendous to verse understanding joys. A stunning, exceptionally marvelous accolade for God in dreams of heaven and tune

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/20/2021 9:51:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad! Your in-depth critique overshadows the poem itself :)