Heart Like Life

A heart is much like life
strong or weak to survive
can be whole 
or take a blow
can be black
can be red
can be cracked or ripped feeling about dead
other than your soul
the heart will get you through and flow
A heart is much like life that is sometimes a drag
to the point where there will always be a balance of the good and the bad
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 9:57 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 9:40 PM
Dj Buell, awesome poem. LINDA
A  Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 9:41 PM
DJ B, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Very good points conveyed..Enjoyed reading your work..Glad that I chose this one to read this eve...Welcome to soup..May your stay be long with many more post like this one..Sara
Brown Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Dj. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
Buell Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 9:09 AM
Thanks dude, lol sorta dedication to one of my tattoos ^^
Lacey Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 12:22 PM
great way of describing how they intertwine! :)
Buell Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 5:06 PM
thank you :), cant wait to share more
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January 30, 2011 at 1:42 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out our contests too...good luck with luv..
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