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Heart Is On Your Sleeve

Your heart is on your sleeve its the only thing I see as prominent as can be so bright, so red, so free! It speaks so loud to me it cries and makes great pleas so crazy, you wouldn't believe that heart that's on your sleeve. Your heart is on your sleeve it can bring you to your knees with it's demands and needs your heart you're bound to heed. I don't think that you could breathe without your heart that's on your sleeve. Written on 7/20/2016

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Date: 7/28/2016 8:21:00 AM
Beautiful writing, girl.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/28/2016 10:46:00 AM
Thank you, Michelle :)
Date: 7/20/2016 3:51:00 PM
this is cute, Laura. Glad you are here trying to write lots of new poems lately!!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/20/2016 8:42:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I'm trying to get back into the Soup again :)
Date: 7/20/2016 11:38:00 AM
Great take on the theme Laura good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/20/2016 2:00:00 PM
Thanks, Jan! Sorry my earlier comment skipped to you!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/20/2016 1:59:00 PM
Thanks, Cheryl :)
Date: 7/20/2016 9:26:00 AM
It's about my favorite idiom.Good poem indeed.Good luck in the contest Laura.Love.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/20/2016 9:31:00 AM
Thanks, Rajat :)
Date: 7/20/2016 9:08:00 AM
Very nice write Laura, some do wear their hearts on their sleeves! Good luck in the contest!:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/20/2016 9:31:00 AM
Thank you, Cheryl :)

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