Heart In Need

A heart that feels broken 
May seem to man, lightly
But to the sole recipient
Completely and rightly

Cautious be your words
Speak not out of turn
The broken hearted hearer
Is apt to crash and burn

Instead perhaps a hug
For the one you hold dear
A shoulder lent to cry on
Your love for them made clear

A silent word of prayer
For this shattered soul do plead
Hold your judgment silent
Let the Master meet the need
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 6, 2014 at 9:02 PM
Debra,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Mcconnell Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 5:27 AM
lovely piece Debra, so well penned speaking through the spirit's leading to gently heal a hurting soul. well done, God bless, Gordon
Liwayway Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 1:54 PM
excellent writer :) congrats!!!
Burchett Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 8:57 PM
A wonderful read , very enjoyable.
Fiery Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 8:57 AM
words of wisdom Debra, u have really written something that i have always felt in my heart...for this shatter soul do plead...ur a poetess in every sense...u captured my emotions here,,,
Lefanue Avatar
January 7, 2012 at 3:42 PM
Thank you, Debra, for your kind comment. Now for your poem - this brought tears to my eyes. A truly beautiful, heart-felt write. God bless, M
Taylor Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 10:06 PM
I hope that this is not about you. You deserve to be happy. Good poem
Rutherford Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 8:56 AM
Debra You are a lady of wisdom with ths poem.Someone said to me after a week ,'Don't you think you've cried enough.' as if I could just stop at will. Christmas will be hard but I have peace know his suffering is over. Just miss him!! Anne
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 10:58 PM
Very good message for giving non-judgmental comfort to the wounded, Debra.
Johnson Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 10:13 PM
the only cure yet of course, is 2 catch another horse(lover) forget about the bitchy past, catch the one true love at last, this time....
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 10:45 AM
Beautiful poem Debra. You got a friend. OXOX Love from Norway and Anne-Lise
Eastman Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 6:12 PM
Very interesting poem. Beautifully written piece.
Johnson Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 8:56 PM
Been there been dumped, good advice 4 hearts thumped, great poem out it jumps, you write em good kid...
Johnson Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 12:38 PM
And so we live another day to wonder how we'll find our way. It helps to know we're not alone. As we sit waiting by the phone. A prayer, a smile, a glint of style. Will make you rise above denile. It's friendly gestures sewn in kind. That truly helps to ease the mind.
Squyres Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 8:08 PM
Now that is a beautifully written comment. Thank you for sharing that.
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November 30, 2011 at 10:48 AM
Wow Debra, this is so moving and so well expressed. A heartfelt read that speaks from the heart, your tender heart. You are a very special person and your poetry is beautiful. Thank you for your kind comments on mine. It's so good to read you again. Million thx for sharing! And May God Bless!
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