Heart In Hand

this earth
and
all your
majesty
starry night
radiant moon
walk out along the street
a cosmic symphony
while
your hand
holding mine
we walk and talk
passing hidden woods
making prints
in ocean sand
trembling heart
hold on tight
feeling universe
heart to heart
hand in hand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 10/9/2015 8:36:00 AM
Lovely piece, Anita.
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Anita Sharma
Date: 10/9/2015 5:39:00 PM
hey thanku james
Date: 10/6/2015 11:33:00 AM
Enjoyed this progressive style and form. Lots of talent here. Congrats, daver
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Anita Sharma
Date: 10/8/2015 6:24:00 AM
thanks daver.
Date: 9/27/2015 9:23:00 PM
Hi Anita, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/10/2015 10:58:00 PM
Buddy. LOL thanks
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Anita Sharma
Date: 9/30/2015 12:43:00 PM
hey thnku buddy
Date: 9/27/2015 1:49:00 PM
- Hey Anita :) - Welcome with your first poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Anita Sharma
Date: 9/30/2015 12:44:00 PM
hey thnks anne
Date: 9/26/2015 2:14:00 AM
Wonderful feeling of tender love,Welcome to the Soup.
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Anita Sharma
Date: 9/26/2015 10:17:00 AM
thnks miraj
Date: 9/23/2015 2:40:00 PM
You write beautifully. . love the prints in ocean sand, Lovely.
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Anita Sharma
Date: 9/23/2015 9:48:00 PM
thanks for the lovely comment..hey i am totally new here on this website..your words really meant a lot
Date: 9/22/2015 6:57:00 PM
Anita, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Anita Sharma
Date: 9/23/2015 8:19:00 AM
thanku so much skat for your kind words.
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