Heart Haiku

I remove the safety
and aim in the direction of your heart
once again, love misses
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Thomer Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 5:22 PM
this was a beautiful haiku, i recognize the emotions. well done, congratulations on your feature this week. --Madison
Knight Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 3:53 PM
o wow, nice and congratz on being featured
Roberts Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 12:38 PM
love it, congrats on having this wonderful haiku featured this week
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 9:53 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup J B. Love, Carol
Eggins Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 5:26 AM
poignant write heart wrenching ending, sigh, congratulations on being featured with your wonderful haiku this week love Jayne
Horsman Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 12:52 AM
love this haiku, Harry
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June 6, 2009 at 7:40 PM
beautiful write
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