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Heart Conditions

[offered to public domain] Loving hearts may often soften brittle hearts in living coffins.

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Date: 7/23/2019 12:57:00 PM
Hello William Coyne, love this poem. These words make sense to me. have a nice day my friend.
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William Coyne
Date: 8/5/2019 8:38:00 PM
I did not know what to think of the two lines for a long time. At first it seemed there might have been a portrait or more to develop. Or maybe a run of companion couplets. I've sent too many poems crumbling by tinkering them to ruin. I left this to stand on its own.

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