Heart Conditions

[offered to public domain]

Loving hearts may often soften
brittle hearts in living coffins.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 12:57 PM
Hello William Coyne, love this poem. These words make sense to me. have a nice day my friend.
Coyne Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 8:38 PM
I did not know what to think of the two lines for a long time. At first it seemed there might have been a portrait or more to develop. Or maybe a run of companion couplets. I've sent too many poems crumbling by tinkering them to ruin. I left this to stand on its own.
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