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Heart Broken But In Love

Heartbroken but in love

Run, run, run,
I'm not Cinderella
Not the gingerbread man
Not dressed in yellow
No gumdrop buttons
Already kissed a fellow
My hearts still rotten
Getting hurt all over
Heartbroken but in love
Broken like a glass slipper
Snapped like a gingerbread cracker
My heart you can zipper
Or fix it with a wrapper
When it's all torn apart
Or broken and shattered
The only thing that can mend it
Is another love who will matter
Whenever cupid sends it
It's like jumping out of an oven
Your heart won't feel broken
Dancing with a prince
Till way past eleven
Then you're in love
Feeling like heaven
It all comes to an end
Having your heart broken 
All over again

S.K.A.T. POETRY

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Skat A

May 27, 2015 at 6:44 PM

.. This poem needs work, sorry for the rude interruption, I will make changes during the summer, if you want to lend a hand please send soup mail to my inbox, I was beginner when I posted this poem..... HUGS SKAT ..

Andrea Dietrich

March 21, 2014 at 10:20 PM

Skat, I enjoyed your comment about my winning in Nathan's contests. I didn't always used to win with him. I remember a time I lost three in a row, like you said happened to you too. I think we just never know sometimes how we will do with judges!

Shawn Munoz

February 2, 2014 at 8:48 AM

Loved it and I can definitly relate, Great Job.

Joseph May

October 30, 2013 at 9:41 PM

A malancholy write Skat....well penned ....hugs

Poet Destroyer A

July 7, 2013 at 12:04 AM

yes! :-)

Jayne Eggins

October 1, 2010 at 6:26 AM

Awww Skat thats a sad ending ... sigh congrates on having your poem featured this week and thanks again for the kind words on my poem .. love Jayne

Thvia Shetley

September 30, 2010 at 4:03 PM

well done and congratulations on your poem being featured this week!

Jay Porknbean

September 30, 2010 at 7:22 AM

very good. tight work!

Wilma Neels

September 30, 2010 at 3:07 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Irma ;) Wilma

Skat A

September 29, 2010 at 8:34 AM

HELLO CONGRATULATIONS TO MY SELF~luv S.K.A.T.

Poet Destroyer A

September 29, 2010 at 8:28 AM

weeee! , CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."

Joy Wellington

September 27, 2010 at 7:59 AM

Hmmm! He who feels it knows it ha? Like it is coming from deep within the heart. Congrats on your featured entry. Joy (Jew)

Daver Austin

September 27, 2010 at 7:13 AM

Hey, S.K.A.T.! Let's rap. Put a tune to this one too. Love your style. Congrats on the selection. Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 27, 2010 at 6:40 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week SKAT*. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 26, 2010 at 3:05 PM

Congrats Irma on your featured poem this week on the Soup ..my BFF ... a nice one to share with us all today with luv... from your BFF forever..

Andrea Dietrich

March 9, 2010 at 9:17 PM

I am just really enjoying the emotion you write with, Irma, even with the spelling mistakes, your soul shines thru and I feel you have a real talent for the pen!! LUv ya, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 9, 2010 at 6:53 PM

Irma this is so lovely.. the more I read your poetry the more I want to read.. excellent .. like dancing with the Prince and your emotional cry in your lines.. thankxxx for enjoying my contest entry tonight.. I know its not Christmas but this contest is calling for a food poem and this was the only one I could find in my many folders and copy books on food... I don't usually write on food ... thankxxx for being my BBF..luv.. Linda-Marie