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Heart Broken But In Love

Heartbroken but in love Run, run, run, I'm not Cinderella Not the gingerbread man Not dressed in yellow No gumdrop buttons Already kissed a fellow My hearts still rotten Getting hurt all over Heartbroken but in love Broken like a glass slipper Snapped like a gingerbread cracker My heart you can zipper Or fix it with a wrapper When it's all torn apart Or broken and shattered The only thing that can mend it Is another love who will matter Whenever cupid sends it It's like jumping out of an oven Your heart won't feel broken Dancing with a prince Till way past eleven Then you're in love Feeling like heaven It all comes to an end Having your heart broken All over again S.K.A.T. POETRY

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/27/2015 6:44:00 PM
.. This poem needs work, sorry for the rude interruption, I will make changes during the summer, if you want to lend a hand please send soup mail to my inbox, I was beginner when I posted this poem..... HUGS SKAT ..
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Date: 3/21/2014 10:20:00 PM
Skat, I enjoyed your comment about my winning in Nathan's contests. I didn't always used to win with him. I remember a time I lost three in a row, like you said happened to you too. I think we just never know sometimes how we will do with judges!
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Date: 2/2/2014 8:48:00 AM
Loved it and I can definitly relate, Great Job.
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Date: 10/30/2013 9:41:00 PM
A malancholy write Skat....well penned ....hugs
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Date: 7/7/2013 12:04:00 AM
yes! :-)
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:26:00 AM
Awww Skat thats a sad ending ... sigh congrates on having your poem featured this week and thanks again for the kind words on my poem .. love Jayne
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Date: 9/30/2010 4:03:00 PM
well done and congratulations on your poem being featured this week!
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Date: 9/30/2010 7:22:00 AM
very good. tight work!
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Date: 9/30/2010 3:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Irma ;) Wilma
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:34:00 AM
HELLO CONGRATULATIONS TO MY SELF~luv S.K.A.T.
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:28:00 AM
weeee! , CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
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Date: 9/27/2010 7:59:00 AM
Hmmm! He who feels it knows it ha? Like it is coming from deep within the heart. Congrats on your featured entry. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 9/27/2010 7:13:00 AM
Hey, S.K.A.T.! Let's rap. Put a tune to this one too. Love your style. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week SKAT*. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 3:05:00 PM
Congrats Irma on your featured poem this week on the Soup ..my BFF ... a nice one to share with us all today with luv... from your BFF forever..
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Date: 3/9/2010 9:17:00 PM
I am just really enjoying the emotion you write with, Irma, even with the spelling mistakes, your soul shines thru and I feel you have a real talent for the pen!! LUv ya, andrea
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Date: 3/9/2010 6:53:00 PM
Irma this is so lovely.. the more I read your poetry the more I want to read.. excellent .. like dancing with the Prince and your emotional cry in your lines.. thankxxx for enjoying my contest entry tonight.. I know its not Christmas but this contest is calling for a food poem and this was the only one I could find in my many folders and copy books on food... I don't usually write on food ... thankxxx for being my BBF..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/6/2010 6:49:00 PM
well we all have to go through aches and pains bfore meeting mr right... good write
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Date: 2/9/2010 6:33:00 PM
ITS SOOOO PAINFUL BUT LOVE HURTS!!!
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:25:00 PM
enjoyed reading, welcome to poetry soup!!
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