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Heart Broken

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Heart Broken

Heart Broken 

this heart is so fragile
easily hurt
hardly heal
a deep feeling so painful
as it's bleeding 
with drops of blood like
a Summer's rain
ceaseless drops
easily hurt by those who claim
those who claim to love 
but hurt
by their unfaithfulness
by their lies and dishonesty
feels this pain in and out
so deep I cannot manage to heal
tears roll down like a child's ball
on an uneven path
does not find its piece
one by one
heart broken
heart forsaken.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 8/5/2017 4:36:00 AM
so sad yet intoxicating. i read every line with a tinge of sorrow; i hope you're doing well; nicely arranged too. God bless! cheers!
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Date: 8/5/2017 4:41:00 AM
Thank you very much John. The heart is easily hurt and yet hardly heal. Thank you.
Date: 8/5/2017 4:10:00 AM
A touching piece Drencho, with the emotions so vividly depicted..
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Date: 8/5/2017 4:24:00 AM
Thank you very much. Thanks alot Lewis.