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Heart Broken

Hard hit on the inside with a devastating impact Ending a pleasure once enjoyed and cherished All events in this situation presents with a heavy baggage Rendering sadness to a degree nature avoids To meet a turning point in life’s book of experiences. Breathlessness, the soul suffers from a mourning mind Ravaging condition from death, failed love or betrayal On a heart on total submission to the vanquished blessing Kicks, felt from the torments of good memories Enslaving in thoughts, imaginations, questions and wishes None giving an answer as the only way forward is to move on.

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/7/2016 2:59:00 AM

Excellent. I like the form and I like the message.

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/6/2016 10:47:00 AM

Excellent acrostic with answer of aspiration at the end. A7. Loved my lovely friend, bl

Funom Makama
Date: 5/9/2016 9:54:00 AM

Thank you very much sir. I really do appreciate it

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/2/2016 7:05:00 PM

A great Acrostic, Funom, and such powerful emotions expressed so beautifully. I enjoyed reading your poem. Sandra

Funom Makama
Date: 5/5/2016 12:11:00 PM

Thank you so much Sandra

Judy Ball

Date: 5/2/2016 7:01:00 PM

Very well thought out and well expressed. When we lose someone or something we love very much there is a deep sense of emptiness that only that person or thing can fill and we are filled with anguish and regret. Moving on is hard but necessary. Great Job. God Bless, JB

Funom Makama
Date: 5/5/2016 12:11:00 PM

Thank you so much Judy

Edlynn Nau

Date: 5/2/2016 1:45:00 PM

Poetry on heartbreak is an important contribution b/c who among us has not suffered this way? Who has gone through life unscathed by this delima of loving unconditionally but not receiving that in return. I think you did an excellent job of showing injury, pain, the thought of healing and the going on b/c...we must. Nicely done!

Funom Makama
Date: 5/5/2016 12:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Edlynn Nau... You are far too kind