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Heart Broken

Four years filled with Happiness, suddenly ripped away, When coming home from work to find out, your not the only one he seems to want, she was suppose to be your best friend , your beloved sister, It turns out she was only your competittor, to get your first and only love. A heart so broken, a soul not at rest, or contented to ever love another. Only to be comfortd by people who are considered your brother.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/19/2013 8:35:00 AM
Hmmm...so sad. Cheer up my dear. Typo error (competittor or competitor ).
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Date: 8/5/2013 1:48:00 PM
If the poem is literal then it is truly sad. The real tragedy being that I think we always love, or seek love, even when we deny it, and even when we know how much it can hurt us, but friendship is easily abandoned when betrayed and much harder to regain, leaving us truly lonely. Great poem and I'm sorry if it is literal.
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Date: 8/5/2013 1:30:00 PM
I'm sorry, but you'll always have a really good friend in me. At least I hope we can still be friends.
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