Heart Broken

Heart Broken

I will always love you, you are forever on my mind
Even though you are now gone, and have left me behind

My world’s been a mess ever since you've passed on
Every night I sit and cry, from dusk until dawn

My heart has been shattered and scattered about
I now spend my days in a shadow of doubt

Each day I will search, for each broken piece and part
I'll carry them all home, cause you’re always in my heart

10/29/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 8:45 AM
A beautiful yet sad write. It is very hard to lose a loved one. Have a beautiful/blessed autumn day.................
M  Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 1:12 AM
Beautiful, relatable and very sad Mark. I’m so sorry you lost your other half….life is so tough sometimes….Debx
M  Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 5:19 AM
Oh that’s good for you Mark. Oh dear….your friend had her brother murdered?? How awful. Debx P.S check out my last poem you’re in it Ha x
Koplin Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 5:02 AM
Thanks Deb, I did not lose my other half thank God. I wrote it for a friend who had her brother murdered.
Cunningham Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 1:10 AM
The loss of someone dear to you is painful Mark, many of us can relate to it. Tom
Koplin Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 5:00 AM
That’s why I wrote it, thanks Tom
Vaso Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 11:55 PM
Now this is poem that resonates with me! love it!
Koplin Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 5:00 AM
I’m glad you liked it bud!
Hankins Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 2:50 PM
Mark, I could certainly relate to this poem, although I've moved on to some degree. I can deal with my loss. I know Deb isn't coming back, so I have to move on...and I know she understands. I still have large pieces of her here in my heart. Thanks for writing this. I needed it.
Koplin Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 3:00 PM
Thanks Milt, I’m sorry for your loss.
Logan Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 1:12 PM
Sorrowful expressions, so vividly written, Mark.
Koplin Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 2:15 PM
Thanks, Jenna!
Allison Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 12:44 PM
beautiful in its sadness Mark, hugs Jan xx
Koplin Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 12:53 PM
Thank you Jan!
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