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Heart Broken

Heart Broken I will always love you, you are forever on my mind Even though you are now gone, and have left me behind My world’s been a mess ever since you've passed on Every night I sit and cry, from dusk until dawn My heart has been shattered and scattered about I now spend my days in a shadow of doubt Each day I will search, for each broken piece and part I'll carry them all home, cause you’re always in my heart 10/29/21

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/30/2021 8:45:00 AM

A beautiful yet sad write. It is very hard to lose a loved one. Have a beautiful/blessed autumn day.................

Deb M

Date: 10/30/2021 1:12:00 AM

Beautiful, relatable and very sad Mark. I’m so sorry you lost your other half….life is so tough sometimes….Debx

Deb M
Date: 10/30/2021 5:19:00 AM

Oh that’s good for you Mark. Oh dear….your friend had her brother murdered?? How awful. Debx P.S check out my last poem you’re in it Ha x

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/30/2021 5:02:00 AM

Thanks Deb, I did not lose my other half thank God. I wrote it for a friend who had her brother murdered.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/30/2021 1:10:00 AM

The loss of someone dear to you is painful Mark, many of us can relate to it. Tom

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/30/2021 5:00:00 AM

That’s why I wrote it, thanks Tom

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/29/2021 11:55:00 PM

Now this is poem that resonates with me! love it!

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/30/2021 5:00:00 AM

I’m glad you liked it bud!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/29/2021 2:50:00 PM

Mark, I could certainly relate to this poem, although I've moved on to some degree. I can deal with my loss. I know Deb isn't coming back, so I have to move on...and I know she understands. I still have large pieces of her here in my heart. Thanks for writing this. I needed it.

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/29/2021 3:00:00 PM

Thanks Milt, I’m sorry for your loss.

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/29/2021 1:12:00 PM

Sorrowful expressions, so vividly written, Mark.

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/29/2021 2:15:00 PM

Thanks, Jenna!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/29/2021 12:44:00 PM

beautiful in its sadness Mark, hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/29/2021 12:53:00 PM

Thank you Jan!