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Heart Break

heart break hands wrung red, raw cancerous lips, chewed sore nails ripped from their beds bleeding, worn broken

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Bl Devnath

Date: 12/16/2011 9:31:00 AM

Congratulation my friend on your grand win and wish you and all yours 'Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Year'.bl

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/13/2011 5:57:00 PM

Congrats on your 1st place win, Debbie. Kim

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/13/2011 8:40:00 AM

It is truly poetic,Debbie.Congratulations on your big win with an amazing poetry!

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/13/2011 4:24:00 AM

Raw emotion, quite vivid.. Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/13/2011 1:38:00 AM

Congratulations Deddie sounds horrible x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2011 9:29:00 PM

oooh, it sounds horrid. Worst kind of heart break ever!! Congrats on your win, Debs. Very descriptive!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2011 9:29:00 PM

PS your avatar is darling!

David Williams

Date: 12/12/2011 2:49:00 PM

Debbie congrats on your win, many thanks for your kind words..David

J. Dover

Date: 12/12/2011 2:02:00 PM

Great poem! Congrats on your big win in Brian's contest :) Love, J.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/12/2011 1:58:00 PM

five very graphic, memorable lines, congrats on 1st place

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/12/2011 12:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fours And Fives" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 5:28:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/8/2011 8:50:00 AM

oh my gosh, after reading this, I am bleeding! this is just Raw indeed- one can almost groan in pain here-- super congrats on this vivid winner! OUCH.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2011 8:43:00 PM

So vividly RAW. Congratulations, DEb. This is not one that people forget!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/5/2011 8:14:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your third place win in Brian's contest with this rare beauty entry luv..enjoy..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/5/2011 7:47:00 AM

smokin', debs.. clap clap for the big win! :) huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/4/2011 4:56:00 PM

Ahhah, deb your muse seems to be very active and colorful today,

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/4/2011 11:31:00 AM

Debbie, I love the raw emotion, especially your second last line ;) enjoy your weekend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2011 10:24:00 AM

wow, what a strong write,Deb. soupmail.

Daljit Khankhana

Date: 6/4/2011 10:02:00 AM

Reality of Life. Heart beats life runs. When heart breaks, life gone. Great thought.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/4/2011 7:21:00 AM

oh, is beautifully bleak, debs... somehow, in ways, the wounds seem too profound to ever heal. Nice job! winning' s beat! :) huggs, nette