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Heart Break

heart break
hands wrung red,    raw
cancerous lips, chewed sore
nails ripped from their beds bleeding, worn
broken

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Bl Devnath

December 16, 2011 at 9:31 AM

Congratulation my friend on your grand win and wish you and all yours 'Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Year'.bl

Kim Merryman

December 13, 2011 at 5:57 PM

Congrats on your 1st place win, Debbie. Kim

Fabiyas M V

December 13, 2011 at 8:40 AM

It is truly poetic,Debbie.Congratulations on your big win with an amazing poetry!

Wilma Neels

December 13, 2011 at 4:24 AM

Raw emotion, quite vivid.. Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 13, 2011 at 1:38 AM

Congratulations Deddie sounds horrible x

Andrea Dietrich

December 12, 2011 at 9:29 PM

oooh, it sounds horrid. Worst kind of heart break ever!! Congrats on your win, Debs. Very descriptive!

Andrea Dietrich

December 12, 2011 at 9:29 PM

PS your avatar is darling!

David Williams

December 12, 2011 at 2:49 PM

Debbie congrats on your win, many thanks for your kind words..David

J. Dover

December 12, 2011 at 2:02 PM

Great poem! Congrats on your big win in Brian's contest :) Love, J.

Charlotte Puddifoot

December 12, 2011 at 1:58 PM

five very graphic, memorable lines, congrats on 1st place

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 12, 2011 at 12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fours And Fives" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 29, 2011 at 5:28 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

June 8, 2011 at 8:50 AM

oh my gosh, after reading this, I am bleeding! this is just Raw indeed- one can almost groan in pain here-- super congrats on this vivid winner! OUCH.