Heart Break

love and wonderful sky
one tear from my eye
hope smashed by pain
legs heavy from the strain
alone i wait to cry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 3:00 PM
cry if you need to cry my friend and if you cant cry peel an onion so you bottle up;-),im joking,if you are in times of cry i wish you smiles and these heartfelt verses are well penned-charma
Bird Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 9:05 PM
a sad and moving heartfelt piece, breaking up with the ones we love is very hard to do!
Kroeger Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 8:33 AM
aww beautiful.. I love it
Anderson Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 8:32 AM
this one starts out with hugs and kisses and the punches you in the gut. very emotional piece. good write
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