Heart Beat

Heart Beat And the beat goes on and on. Fari, belts out the souls song of all mankind does wrong to hearts of First Nations throng. B. J. “A ” 2 April 10th 2015

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Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/2/2016 11:14:00 PM

Thanks very much for the kind words. I enjoy being on the Soup and to be frank, my love for writing poems started here. Good luck in your endeavours too. :) Sunita UPD

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/1/2016 11:02:00 AM

Well done. Congrats to be featured! :) Sunita

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 9/1/2016 12:03:00 PM

Thank you Sunita U Palawon Daiboo, for your comment “ Well done. Congrats to be featured! :) ” and for taking the time to read my stuff. It is always a pleasure to receive a word from a fellow member every once in a while. It seems as though you are a most recent Souper and very prolific at your craft (( fifty two poems in less than three months )) quite an accomplishment young lady !!! Even a win in such a short time, congratulations and may the future be even brighter for you and your work !!! B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/16/2015 5:19:00 AM

Nice! Seems a very memorable night, sire. This is the 2nd poem you've written about it. How are you sire? Hugs and smiles from the isles! :)

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 4/16/2015 10:47:00 AM

and is putting together a play that speaks to the abuses perpetrated upon the First Nations children, in residential schools and in society as well, as the government and christianity beating assimilation into the Native children of this country . I see that you have added a couple of more gems to your collection. “ WAVE INTO YOU - A Collaborative Write with JW ” a very interesting piece, reminds me of the Polish Princess ( I am sure you have read about her in my stuff ) and her art collaboration ( three artist painting on the same canvas ) . B. J. “A ” 2 ( Bill . )

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 4/16/2015 10:47:00 AM

Good morning Kim : Nice to see a word or two from you again. Thank you for stopping by. “ How are you sire? ” I a just fine my Dear, hope the same is for you ??? As for “ This is the 2nd poem you've written about it. ” not quite. About Fari, yes but two different subject ( 1 ) Yes, A Night with Stars is about “ a very memorable night, ”. ( 2 ) Heart Beat is about the ladies journey, – some thirty years I believe – about her soul. She devotes most of her time fighting the injustices done and being done to the Native population here in B. C.