Rama Balasubramanian Poet Monoku

Heart Attack

murder in tunnel, dead fat blocks passage to heart ~ unhealthy habits

28 Jan 2021
Written for Murder in the tunnel contest by Kai Michael Neumann
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Akkina Downing January 31, 2021 at 9:41 PM Oh I know more than a few who had it. Great monoku, Rama :) Rama Balasubramanian January 31, 2021 at 10:36 PM Thanks

Richard Lamoureux January 31, 2021 at 8:37 AM There is wisdom in this piece. Rama Balasubramanian January 31, 2021 at 10:09 AM Thanks

Gershon Wolf January 29, 2021 at 10:08 AM 'The tunnel of love' transformed to a tunnel to get rid of. Here's to healthy habits, Rama! Good Health and Long Life, Gershon Rama Balasubramanian January 29, 2021 at 10:12 AM Good Health and Long Life, to you too Gershon. Enjoy your day. Take care Rama

Victor Buhagiar January 29, 2021 at 3:43 AM Having had a triple bypass about twenty years ago, I know what you imply. ~~ Rama Balasubramanian January 29, 2021 at 4:10 AM Must have been a nightmare. My husband once hospitalized for high BP. Still cannot forget the tension I had. Thanks for reading and commenting. Take care, Rama

Alexis Y. January 28, 2021 at 9:18 PM WoW! Rama, Good take on the contest theme. You said much in your one liner. This happens often from unhealthily eating habits. Best wishes in the contest-Alexis Rama Balasubramanian January 29, 2021 at 4:07 AM Thanks. Hubby gave this idea. Think different. I agree u healthy eating habits and lack of exercise. Love and hugs. Take care Rama