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Heart Attack

murder in tunnel, dead fat blocks passage to heart ~ unhealthy habits

28 Jan 2021
Written for Murder in the tunnel contest by Kai Michael Neumann
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Akkina Downing Date: 1/31/2021 9:41:00 PM Oh I know more than a few who had it. Great monoku, Rama :) Login to Reply Rama Balasubramanian Date: 1/31/2021 10:36:00 PM Thanks

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/31/2021 8:37:00 AM There is wisdom in this piece. Login to Reply Rama Balasubramanian Date: 1/31/2021 10:09:00 AM Thanks

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/29/2021 10:08:00 AM 'The tunnel of love' transformed to a tunnel to get rid of. Here's to healthy habits, Rama! Good Health and Long Life, Gershon Login to Reply Rama Balasubramanian Date: 1/29/2021 10:12:00 AM Good Health and Long Life, to you too Gershon. Enjoy your day. Take care Rama

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/29/2021 3:43:00 AM Having had a triple bypass about twenty years ago, I know what you imply. ~~ Login to Reply Rama Balasubramanian Date: 1/29/2021 4:10:00 AM Must have been a nightmare. My husband once hospitalized for high BP. Still cannot forget the tension I had. Thanks for reading and commenting. Take care, Rama

Alexis Y. Date: 1/28/2021 9:18:00 PM WoW! Rama, Good take on the contest theme. You said much in your one liner. This happens often from unhealthily eating habits. Best wishes in the contest-Alexis Login to Reply Rama Balasubramanian Date: 1/29/2021 4:07:00 AM Thanks. Hubby gave this idea. Think different. I agree u healthy eating habits and lack of exercise. Love and hugs. Take care Rama