Heart Apocalypse

Today my heart is obscurely tenebrous,
It no longer dances to your a cappella heartbeats,
Neither does it tune to the acoustic of your heart,
It has ceased skipping a beat in a fashionable art.

Today the virgin forest in my heart is murky,
The trees bow in retardation for a snooze party,
The rowdy rackety crickets have broken limbs,
The fire flies are devoid of signature fire on their backs.

Today the once dreamy ocean in my heart is calm,
Its soothingly beguiling waves isn’t your balm,
The coral reefs are deeply engrossed in a death sleep,
Sea demons are surprisingly afraid of the storm’s sweep.

Today the roses in my heart are dried and shriveled,
Its thristle thorns prickle can leave one crippled,
Their ambrosial scent has faded away dramatically,
For the roses are no longer minty, but dried stigmatically.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Schiavina Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 3:23 PM
Very well done. Congratulations! Laugh and the world laughs with you, cry and the whole world also cries with you. Original!
Otieng Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 7:27 AM
Thanks Frances.
Gentry Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 12:41 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win! :)
Otieng Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 5:48 AM
Thanks Susan.
Wolf Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 5:18 PM
Whoa! --from "obscurely tenebrous" to "dried stigmatically" you piqued my curiosity so poetically! ... Congratulations on your win, Samuel! Best wishes, Gershon
Otieng Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 5:48 AM
Thank you Gershon.
Cozart Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Beautiful word choices. Some nice alliteration, too. Congrats.
Otieng Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Thank you Dale.
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 9:11 AM
An emotive write, Samuel. Well penned. Congrats on your gold meal win.
Otieng Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Thank you so much Line. I appreciate it.
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