Heart

Is this considered a poem since I didn’t rhyme, I don't know what form. 

 I sit at my computer staring at the screen
Looking back at me is this beautiful slender blonde with blue eyes
It’s the woman I was married to for so many years
For all our years her hands were up and between them she held my heart
Her hands are now empty and down at her side
Now that my heart is back inside it feels pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/7/2010 7:16:00 PM
Michael, soup mail waiting.....Charles Hey, just got through looking at all your poems again. They sure look different with all those comments. And some of the best of the soup supporting you. Way to go!
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Date: 7/4/2010 3:46:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.
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Date: 7/3/2010 7:59:00 AM
Michael, sorry about the mistake of you living in Arizona...I read into your work something that wasn't there..This expresses emotion and is descriptive so it has poetic qualities..Try looking to your left and at the bottom there is a box that says Resources..Look at forms there maybe Free Verse or narrative or blank verse ,etc..Sara ..Soup Mail in a few minutes..;Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..
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