Heart

I feel my heart beating
I can feel it bleeding
Is this what it is like?
it is like when I fell off my bike
I was scraped up and bleeding
but to my surprise I was still breathing
when you died
I died
so why is it that I am not dead?
I pray and wish for the end
but there is hope because my heart is still
beating
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 5:22 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Chay. Looking forward to reading more of your writing. Love, Carol
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March 2, 2010 at 12:55 PM
Sorry about your loss if this is about your life..I hope that healing comes soon...I have lost loved ones and it is not easy..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Echo Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 12:55 PM
This is a great poem Chay! I would make it a little longer but i still love it =D -Echo
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