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Heart

I feel my heart beating I can feel it bleeding Is this what it is like? it is like when I fell off my bike I was scraped up and bleeding but to my surprise I was still breathing when you died I died so why is it that I am not dead? I pray and wish for the end but there is hope because my heart is still beating

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/3/2010 5:22:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Chay. Looking forward to reading more of your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 12:55:00 PM
Sorry about your loss if this is about your life..I hope that healing comes soon...I have lost loved ones and it is not easy..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/2/2010 12:55:00 PM
This is a great poem Chay! I would make it a little longer but i still love it =D -Echo
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