Notes About The Poem

Heart

Heart spiritual
Emotes Gods love pulsation
Altar ovoidal
Reshaping each vibration
Taming tempests toroidal

17-May-2021

Tankacrostic Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 2:16 PM
Nicely done, Unseeking Seeker! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Seeker Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 9:01 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Y. Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Hi Seeker, You composed a well-written acrostic on the heart. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis
Seeker Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:48 PM
Thank you, Alexis!
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 12:13 PM
I had to look up the last word!! Thanks a lot, Unseeking Seeker. haha. Interesting way to describe tempests!! The message of your poem is lovely. Congrats in my contest.
Seeker Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:49 PM
Thanks for hosting Andrea and congrats to you on inventing another poetry form
Kauffman Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 2:18 PM
Wonderful use of unique rhyming words Seeker. This is obviously written from your heart. Best wishes for the contest.
Seeker Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 6:39 PM
Thank you, Sam! Andrea has invented yet another form, it seems, the other I know of, being Hexasonneta, so we should give it a shot! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 2:46 AM
My late friend Winged Warrior used to indulge in difficult words. You remind me of him.
Seeker Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 4:38 AM
Hahaha! My average vocabulary measures around 2-3 on the PS scale of 1-10
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