Hear My Whisper

I 've heard that true love is a fairy tale
As it's said about angels coming in the night
But when I met you I felt something made me sail
Away from a stormy sea to heaven's best site

I've always wished an extraordinary abode
As a palace showing marvellous art
But right now I'm singing you this ode
As the place I wish to live in is your heart

Can you hear my whisper? my words of love
revealing a yelling soul that's gonna blow
Hoping to reach a star in the sky above
As without you , it 'll fall in a cliff of misery below

Can you hear my request from God? so true
To be together forever till the end of time
And on growing up , wishing to die before you
As the reverse means a dead life having no rhyme

By: A. Badr

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/19/2015 5:37:00 PM
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:24:00 PM
So sweet and the last two lines almost brought me to tears.
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Ahmed Badr
Date: 2/26/2015 12:01:00 PM
thanks so much
Date: 2/22/2015 9:17:00 PM
Very nice poem, enjoyed it
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Ahmed Badr
Date: 2/26/2015 12:02:00 PM
thanks
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