Robert Lindley Poet Than-Bauk

Hear My Sweet Dreams

Hear My Sweet Dreams


Hold your dreams tight!
In your sight then
Each night sleep there.

Dream on with glee!
You hold me thus
Lets be with care.

Under pale blue moon
Love blooms soon show
in rooms quite fair.

Velvet touch spreads!
On soft beds slept
Love weds our pair.

I think your kiss
Each I miss now
A remised share.

Hear my sweet dreams
We ride streams down
Fire steams our pair!

Robert J. Lindley, 3-07-2016 


Not For Contest. 
Added end rhyme as a bonus.....third verse each stanza..
there, care, fair, pair, share, pair .
 
POETRY FORM- Than-Bauk, 4 syllables per verse, 3 verses per poem.
I wrote mine as a double--never like to be restrained or told to follow limiting rules.
Thus this one is ineligible for the contest I wrote it for.
No disrespect but too bad the sponsor decided they did not want to read longer poems. -Tyr
 

POETRY FORM- Than-Bauk

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Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2016 at 6:16 PM I enjoyed seeing you do a different kind of form with this one I missed from before. Very nice, Robert. hope you saw my Soupmail to you. Please see right away.

Timothy Hicks March 8, 2016 at 10:50 PM Wonderfully penned ... it felt very natural despite the tricky form. And it has the extra bonus of additional rhymes at the end of each line. Your first stanza is my favorite ... sleeping where your dreams are ... very cool.

Paul Callus March 8, 2016 at 11:52 AM You have tackled this tricky form with apparent ease, Robert! I like the content...really romantic. All the best, my friend (been off with a bad cold, but now recuperating). ~ paul

Robert Lindley March 8, 2016 at 11:01 AM Thanks my friends. I started writing and just let it flow on out. DID NOT HAVE THE HEART TO CUT IN DOWN TO MEET THE SPECIFIC CONTEST REQUIREMENTS.

Red Fiery March 7, 2016 at 8:23 PM A very captivating piece, Robert ! Alright , it's oficial now- I am the biggest fan of your sonnets..7/7 Robert Lindley March 8, 2016 at 11:02 AM THANKS RED....