Health's Treasure

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" Health's Treasure" From my roof top garden, 26 June 2017, my photo,©

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Health is an incalculable treasure that its value cannot be estimated till the moment it is lost!








© Demetrios Trifiatis
         26 June 2017

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Michael Tor

Date: 8/22/2017 8:48:00 PM

A truthful write here my friend, excellent!

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/27/2017 5:32:00 AM

Very true ... though the monoku reading gets interrupted by the incomparable roof top hue ... thank you ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/27/2017 8:18:00 AM

You are so good dear, Probir! Your comments always overshadow my poetry! haha!

Maria Williams

Date: 6/26/2017 7:51:00 AM

Referring to your comment to Victor, did you think perhaps you were kept around to keep writing your gems of sagacity for us uninformed souls? Wonderful write my friend and so close to our belief of health for all - What we put into our bodies how to reap good health ...Maria

Maria Williams
Date: 6/27/2017 2:03:00 AM

dear Demetrios, thanks for pointing out my mistake, meant to say uninformed beings. I have always believed that the Soul will always belong to and draw wisdom from its maker? Isn't it the Spirit that lingers still after death, the ones attached to this world and find it too hard to cross over? I would like to hear your thoughts?

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/26/2017 9:03:00 AM

Uninformed souls? There are no souls like that for all souls are wise, they only have to remember their wisdom! I do not think the Lord kept me for any special reason for I am unworthy, certainly HE would have chosen someone more important and wiser than myself dearest, Maria! Thank you for your lovely visit and kind comment! God bless you!