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a random drive-by
where dealers negotiate~
tots life ebbs away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Semeniuk Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 8:51 AM
niice write!..love the content although its so sad!..i have a poem along the same story line called "reckless loss" check it out...
Mehta Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 10:00 PM
I enjoyed the deep meanings in the poem
A   Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 8:53 PM
A deep sorrow, write way to sad for a stupid reason. Enjoyed..p.d.
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