Head Up Little Sister

Pushed back into a corner by what they claim her to be
They're not the same as what they claim they want to be
Stronger, they are taller by far born to rule and lead the way

She's no good lower class less than zero broken glass
Head down she looks away eyes closed as if to pray
No one listens no one cares no one there to wipe her tears

Who is she to draw a breath every one the fear of death
Must be strong have no fear eyes wide open crystal clear
Moving swiftly crouching low hang on tight don't let go

Trying hard to have a voice pushing forward only choice
Can't go back must push on fighting till the break of dawn
Face turned up feel the sun war is over battles won

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Date: 7/22/2016 4:52:00 PM
loved how you ended this with the SUN!! Feeling it on one's face, the war is DONE!!!
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Date: 7/9/2016 8:59:00 AM
Congrats on your win, like the rhythm and beat of your poem.
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Date: 7/8/2016 4:21:00 PM
Nice write, Scott! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 7/9/2016 8:42:00 AM
Thanks, Kim. I appreciate your feedback.
Date: 7/8/2016 4:21:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your emotional piece.... Congrats Scott, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/8/2016 7:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Teddy. I appreciate you reading my work.
Date: 7/7/2016 1:40:00 PM
Scott, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "PAIN GETS IN THE WAY OF FORGIVENESS" if you'd like..... Love LINDA
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Date: 7/8/2016 7:03:00 AM
Thank you Linda. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my work. I'll be stopping by your blog.
Date: 11/20/2015 11:17:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with these superb lyrics Scott!
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Date: 11/21/2015 1:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. It means a lot to me that you take the time to read my work.
Date: 11/20/2015 8:08:00 PM
Congrats on this poem once again. SKAT
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Date: 11/21/2015 1:14:00 AM
Thanks again SKAT. I really appreciate you taking the time to acknowledge my work. It means so much to me.
Date: 11/20/2015 12:07:00 PM
Keep on fighting for her Scott - a great message:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/21/2015 1:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan. I really appreciate your feedback.
Date: 11/7/2015 8:37:00 PM
I'm moved by your poem Scott, I'm glad she has a brother like you to help her through this ... SKAT
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Date: 11/7/2015 11:14:00 PM
Thanks. I really appreciate your feedback on this. It means a lot to me.
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