He Wished Upon a Star

The sun shone upon him As he wished all day long Thought odds were grim He'd sing that same song He lost his faith in all Still held on to some hope One day love would call He'd find a way to cope Held onto all his sorrow Refused to let it go But he never had to borrow A love for him did grow She sent it each twilight Upon the gentle breeze Days it shown so bright She sent it with an ease Asking nothing in return Wished only to lift his heart He became her one concern For a true love to be a part
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Makama Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 10:44 AM
Refined and fine, I'm grateful because its beautiful, great lines with fire, connecting me like a wire, shows the glory of your hand and the power of your mind. An excellent piece my friend.
Chiri Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 12:28 PM
Funom thank you so much!;)
Scars Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 6:52 AM
I also read this one too- how I know? the rhythm and rhyme was amazing. I love your adoration. Be blessed and hugs :)-luloo
Chiri Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 12:27 PM
Ah Laura thank you once again! You truly are too kind!;)
Perrin Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 6:25 AM
Beautifully written Brenda :-) x
Chiri Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 12:00 PM
Elaine thank you so much!;)
Mcconnell Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 2:40 PM
A rather nice thoughtful piece Brenda, I really loved your rhyme too. Glad to see you're still writing real poetic gems. Poetry hugs,Gordon
Chiri Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 7:47 PM
Gordon thx so much for always supporting my work!;)
Mcintosh Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 6:09 AM
This is very sweet and wonderful rhyme. I enjoyed it and wish you many more great poems. Blessings and love sent your way, Gina
Chiri Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 7:47 PM
Thank you so much Regina!;)
Warrior Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 5:06 AM
Nice one sis...your poetry just keeps getting better and better...the Uincornies and I can't keep up lol...puff puff pt 2 coming soon, maybe this weekend...all my love, bro bro...
Chiri Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 7:46 PM
Thank you bro bro!;) I cant wait to read part 2! I know it will be amazing as part 1!;)
Poetry Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 6:41 PM
Very enjoyable B, hope this evening carries you well
Chiri Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 7:35 PM
Thank you and you too T;)
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