He Watches From the Tree

old oak branches out
roots along the river's bank
bald eagle within

february 1, 2020

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Marc Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 10:01 AM
I love everything about this haiku ~ Fave
Adams Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 5:25 AM
Thank you so much PM for the honor :)
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February 3, 2020 at 11:03 AM
What a coincidence, Sandra! We both wrote about bald eagles in our recent poems! ...must have been on the same wavelength:) Congratulations on your fine win. Regards & Hugs // paul
Adams Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 11:10 AM
Thank you Paul...i saw an eagle sitting in the tree over the river and though i didn't get his picture that day he did inspire my muse...the photo is one i took when i spotted a pair resting in a tree... we have many of them around here... hugs
Green Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 6:59 AM
Congrats on your win and your beautiful poem. you paint a brilliant picture in a few short words. Loved this Sandy
Adams Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 10:18 AM
Thank you so very much Chris :) hugs
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February 2, 2020 at 9:48 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra, nicely done. Hugs Eve
Adams Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 10:17 AM
Thank you so much Eve... hugs
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February 2, 2020 at 12:34 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 1:04 PM
thank you so much Anne-Lise :) hugs and have a wonderful sunday!
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February 2, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Nicely done, sandy. Congrats. I sure enjoy reading this winners list
Adams Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Thank you so much Andrea... many beauties on that list :) hugs
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February 2, 2020 at 8:05 AM
Well crafted poem, congrats-Peter
Adams Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Thank you so much Peter :) hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 5:55 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Sandra! : ) xxoo
Adams Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 7:23 AM
Thank you so much Connie :). Hugs XoXo
Cunningham Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 11:27 PM
Back with congrats Sandra. Tom
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 11:48 PM
Thank you so much Tom :) hugs
Somadas Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 11:10 PM
bald eagle... Great imagery Sandra.. Congrats on your fantastic win..
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 11:23 PM
Thank you so much Jenish. I love seeing them they truly are beautiful birds :) hugs
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February 1, 2020 at 8:30 PM
Without the picture, still ever so visual..love this Sandra.
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 8:36 PM
Thank you so much Harry. I often see them but am not always able to get shots of them but they are beautiful to see regardless :) hugs
Wolf Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 8:30 PM
Telling portrayal -- 'outside-in!' All my thumbs up for this haiku, my friend. Smiles, Gershon
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 8:34 PM
Thank you so much Gershon :) hugs
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February 1, 2020 at 8:23 PM
We have them here on Lake Ouachita. They are majestic indeed. Nice write, Sandra. good luck!
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 8:33 PM
You too are blessed... Happy to see them around I know years ago they were feared to become extinct. Thank you Daniel :) hugs
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February 1, 2020 at 4:25 PM
Magnificent birds Sandra, like your haiku. Good luck, enjoy your weekend. Tom
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 4:32 PM
Thank you so much Tom...i feel blessed whenever i am fortunate enough to see them... have a great weekend yourself...hugs
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February 1, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Cool imagery...
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 4:31 PM
thank you...i love seeing the eagles...so beautiful they are! hugs
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February 1, 2020 at 3:55 PM
Splendid imagery Sandy--beautifully captured in your succinct words--sure to win!
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 4:01 PM
Thank you Vijay, i am not sure about a win, but i am blessed to be able to see them in our skies...(except when i am out with my little dogs, then i worry about seeing the birds of prey more than admiring them) hugs
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February 1, 2020 at 3:35 PM
- Excellent written, Sandra :) - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely evening :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 3:51 PM
Thank you so much my friend... enjoy your weekend.. they go by too fast... hugs
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February 1, 2020 at 3:11 PM
Outstanding beauty dearest, Sandra!
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 3:29 PM
thank you Demetrios...i am blessed to have them living near me... hugs
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February 1, 2020 at 3:05 PM
beautiful imagery, Sandra.
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 3:06 PM
thank you line...i saw him from my bus the other day...always so beautiful and a delight to see... hugs
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