He Watches From the Tree

old oak branches out
roots along the river's bank
bald eagle within

february 1, 2020

Strict Haiku Poetry Contest
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Date: 2/17/2020 10:01:00 AM
I love everything about this haiku ~ Fave
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/18/2020 5:25:00 AM
Thank you so much PM for the honor :)
Date: 2/3/2020 11:03:00 AM
What a coincidence, Sandra! We both wrote about bald eagles in our recent poems! ...must have been on the same wavelength:) Congratulations on your fine win. Regards & Hugs // paul
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/3/2020 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Paul...i saw an eagle sitting in the tree over the river and though i didn't get his picture that day he did inspire my muse...the photo is one i took when i spotted a pair resting in a tree... we have many of them around here... hugs
Date: 2/3/2020 6:59:00 AM
Congrats on your win and your beautiful poem. you paint a brilliant picture in a few short words. Loved this Sandy
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/3/2020 10:18:00 AM
Thank you so very much Chris :) hugs
Date: 2/2/2020 9:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra, nicely done. Hugs Eve
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/3/2020 10:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve... hugs
Date: 2/2/2020 12:34:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/2/2020 1:04:00 PM
thank you so much Anne-Lise :) hugs and have a wonderful sunday!
Date: 2/2/2020 9:30:00 AM
Nicely done, sandy. Congrats. I sure enjoy reading this winners list
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/2/2020 12:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea... many beauties on that list :) hugs
Date: 2/2/2020 8:05:00 AM
Well crafted poem, congrats-Peter
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/2/2020 12:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Peter :) hugs
Date: 2/2/2020 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Sandra! : ) xxoo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/2/2020 7:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie :). Hugs XoXo
Date: 2/1/2020 11:27:00 PM
Back with congrats Sandra. Tom
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 11:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom :) hugs
Date: 2/1/2020 11:10:00 PM
bald eagle... Great imagery Sandra.. Congrats on your fantastic win..
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 11:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Jenish. I love seeing them they truly are beautiful birds :) hugs
Date: 2/1/2020 8:30:00 PM
Without the picture, still ever so visual..love this Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 8:36:00 PM
Thank you so much Harry. I often see them but am not always able to get shots of them but they are beautiful to see regardless :) hugs
Date: 2/1/2020 8:30:00 PM
Telling portrayal -- 'outside-in!' All my thumbs up for this haiku, my friend. Smiles, Gershon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 8:34:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon :) hugs
Date: 2/1/2020 8:23:00 PM
We have them here on Lake Ouachita. They are majestic indeed. Nice write, Sandra. good luck!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 8:33:00 PM
You too are blessed... Happy to see them around I know years ago they were feared to become extinct. Thank you Daniel :) hugs
Date: 2/1/2020 4:25:00 PM
Magnificent birds Sandra, like your haiku. Good luck, enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 4:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom...i feel blessed whenever i am fortunate enough to see them... have a great weekend yourself...hugs
Date: 2/1/2020 4:21:00 PM
Cool imagery...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 4:31:00 PM
thank you...i love seeing the eagles...so beautiful they are! hugs
Date: 2/1/2020 3:55:00 PM
Splendid imagery Sandy--beautifully captured in your succinct words--sure to win!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 4:01:00 PM
Thank you Vijay, i am not sure about a win, but i am blessed to be able to see them in our skies...(except when i am out with my little dogs, then i worry about seeing the birds of prey more than admiring them) hugs
Date: 2/1/2020 3:35:00 PM
- Excellent written, Sandra :) - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely evening :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 3:51:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend... enjoy your weekend.. they go by too fast... hugs
Date: 2/1/2020 3:11:00 PM
Outstanding beauty dearest, Sandra!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 3:29:00 PM
thank you Demetrios...i am blessed to have them living near me... hugs
Date: 2/1/2020 3:05:00 PM
beautiful imagery, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 3:06:00 PM
thank you line...i saw him from my bus the other day...always so beautiful and a delight to see... hugs
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