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He Was Never True

About him is a certain style So special he makes one feel My lips he brings a daily smile His feelings you think are real When he moves on oh the pain As he shows his uncaring way On your heart he'll leave a stain Along with the price you'll pay Time moves on, you finally see His attention given to one new Another he gives the same glee Now you see he was never true

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John Fleming

Date: 8/8/2019 1:27:00 PM

Ahhh. I thought I had commented here previous...obviously not. As always, in your rhyming poetry, skips delightfully along; prefer your more upbeat moods though, Brenda...still -- a decent little poem! Lots of hugs. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/11/2019 11:51:00 AM

Thank you John!;)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/1/2019 10:18:00 AM

Sadly our world is full of people like that Brenda, great at putting on the charm and sucking you in but after a while you see through it, hopefully not too late. Tom.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/11/2019 11:51:00 AM

Thanks Tom so much!;)