He Was Everything

He was everything.
He kissed away all of the pain.
He held her tight,
All through the night.
She never thought
that they would end.
He broke her heart,
he won't do it again.
He was the one
who drove her insane,
but he was worth every ounce
of her pain.
He was everything.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 9:40 AM
wow now i really like this one! it was very very emotional and we all know what it feels to have our hearts broken. short, bittersweet and as usual very well written! Jo
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 9:43 PM
I really like this one. Luv, Andrea
Anderson Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 1:07 PM
Sad, well-written verse. Thanks for your comments left on my poem Serenity. ....Jimmy
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 1:50 PM
Sounds like self-sacrificing love. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
Keen Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 10:14 AM
This is sad, but you will heal from that sharp puncture in your heart.You are my new friend!
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 12:53 PM
I enjoyed this one too. A bittersweet story. Andrea
Cheeseman Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 11:11 AM
Nice write enjoyed this, depth of feeling Daniel
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