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He Sleeps

Tired blue eyes hidden Under bruised lids. An exhausted smile Flits across pale lips. Hopefully the rest that Was eluding him is Now within reach. He sleeps. He seems at peace finally. His mind is always working Even when he is asleep. The stillness is an illusion. That is why he never Feels like he has rested. His mind is going 150 miles per hour Especially when his body isn’t. Childhood returns as he sleeps The worries, cares, concerns, and hurts Of being a grownup fade away Leaving behind innocence and contentment. He, like everyone else, is at His most vulnerable when asleep. All masks come off Showing the true person. That is why I watch Over him in this state. Because finally, He sleeps.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/30/2010 4:32:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Pamela. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 3:02:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I really enjoyed reading your poems.
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Date: 8/27/2010 2:00:00 PM
I enjoyed you creative writing and i especially enjoyed the conclusion to this poem.nicely written.Love,Jamecia
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Date: 8/26/2010 1:50:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. there are many contests offered on the contest page.. check it out and enter.. a sure to have your poetry read more frequently..luv..
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