He Sleeps

Tired blue eyes hidden
Under bruised lids.
An exhausted smile
Flits across pale lips.

Hopefully the rest that
Was eluding him is
Now within reach.
He sleeps.

He seems at peace finally.
His mind is always working
Even when he is asleep.
The stillness is an illusion.

That is why he never 
Feels like he has rested.
His mind is going 150 miles per hour
Especially when his body isn’t.

Childhood returns as he sleeps
The worries, cares, concerns, and hurts
Of being a grownup fade away
Leaving behind innocence and contentment.

He, like everyone else, is at
His most vulnerable when asleep.
All masks come off
Showing the true person.

That is why I watch
Over him in this state.
Because finally,
He sleeps.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 30, 2010 at 4:32 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Pamela. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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August 29, 2010 at 3:02 PM
Welcome to the soup. I really enjoyed reading your poems.
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August 27, 2010 at 2:00 PM
I enjoyed you creative writing and i especially enjoyed the conclusion to this poem.nicely written.Love,Jamecia
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August 26, 2010 at 1:50 PM
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