(he Said) I Love You

She sits alone as the sun goes down
Like she does almost every night
Knowing he'll come home drunk again
And start another fight

She was so young when she met him
Just sixteen years and a day
She hated her life on the farm
And he promised to take her away

How could she know he was lying
Just feeding her a line
She'd never had any love at home
And his, "I love you" sounded so fine

The sun shone on their wedding day
She was a happy girl
But, too soon the storm clouds gathered
And totally ruined her world

She tried so hard for three long years
Answering to his beck and call
Then one day she packed her bags
An walked away from it all

She knew her love for him had died
She was taking his abuse no more
After writing a note saying, "GO TO HELL"
She walked for the last time, out the door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Brown Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 4:44 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in John's contest Vernette. Love, Carol
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 1:57 AM
Congratulations Vernette, on your 3rd place win with these impassioned emotions. Good writing! Lovingly, Dane Ann
Sweetheart Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 7:09 AM
Congrats Vernette on your winning poem in John's contest with this wonderful write.. enjoy the success of victory .. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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