He Said
I said, ' Oh how I hurt'
He said ' Nothing'
I said ' I am in so much pain'
He said ' Nothing
I cried ' I can't stand any more
Please, I implored
Please help me lord
But still, Nothing
I said, 'I 've lost my child
It's just not fair
Lord ,where are you
Dont you care
Then he said
I lost mine too
I cried just like you
And no i'ts not fair
But yes 'I do care
I said 'lord I still hurt
He said,
So do I.
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