He Said

He said you’re cute
She said so are you
He said I like blonds
She said me too
She said would you like to find a quiet place to talk
He said I know a place down the block
Noticing what she had not before said I’ll have to decline
Your left hand implies someone might mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 11, 2010 at 9:06 PM
Now that's funny. Very amusing, with a twist. That jerk!!! Men are pigs!!!! Oink, oink. Joe
Tak Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 12:38 AM
Loved that the ending wasn't what I had expected.
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April 12, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Intriguing write Lori
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April 11, 2010 at 5:04 PM
good move, enjoyed
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