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He Said

He said you’re cute She said so are you He said I like blonds She said me too She said would you like to find a quiet place to talk He said I know a place down the block Noticing what she had not before said I’ll have to decline Your left hand implies someone might mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/11/2010 9:06:00 PM
Now that's funny. Very amusing, with a twist. That jerk!!! Men are pigs!!!! Oink, oink. Joe
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Date: 4/14/2010 12:38:00 AM
Loved that the ending wasn't what I had expected.
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Date: 4/12/2010 1:12:00 PM
Intriguing write Lori
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:04:00 PM
good move, enjoyed
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