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He Rescues Me

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Why do I feel so low today? I trust that if I kneel and pray, my sincere appeal for help will convey high hopes He’ll hold my troubles at bay. By default, I get off-keel and lose my way, sigh, and say, “Lord, heal my hurt; dispel my dismay.” June 28, 2020 Entered in the Triple Rhyme Contest Placed 2nd Sponsor: Beth Evans

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/15/2020 2:21:00 PM

Loved this delightful muse of hope and faith Janice. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/16/2020 7:24:00 AM

Thank you so much, Aditi. Janice

James Inman

Date: 7/13/2020 7:17:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your lovely poem Janice.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/14/2020 7:52:00 AM

Thanks so much, James. Janice

Eric Cohen

Date: 7/11/2020 2:45:00 PM

Congrats, Janice. This form is difficult but you made a coherent message flow with feeling to the end.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/14/2020 7:53:00 AM

Eric, thank you for this wonderful comment. Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2020 1:48:00 PM

This is a very good write in that form he gave us, Janice. Congrats for your win.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/11/2020 2:02:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/11/2020 11:54:00 AM

Congrats!! dear friend on your win...well crafted Janice...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/11/2020 12:29:00 PM

Thanks a million, WW! Janice

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/11/2020 8:57:00 AM

Witty indeed, Janice, I truly love it and my compliments on your placement -- Aloha~@William

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/11/2020 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning lines of faith, Janice.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/11/2020 8:47:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jenna. Janice

John Watt

Date: 7/4/2020 7:44:00 PM

Janice, you tackled this difficult challenge well, and ended with a comforting message of faith and trust in God. I hope this does well in the contest ~ John

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/4/2020 8:50:00 PM

Thanks so much, John! This one was a real challenge. Janice

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/29/2020 7:12:00 AM

These triple rhymes look so hard to execute--you did well, Janice, within a divine message and a prayer.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/29/2020 8:05:00 AM

Vijay, I really worked on this one. As Beth said, opening rhymes are the hardest! Thanks so much. Janice