Janice Canerdy Poet Rhyme

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He Rescues Me

Why do I feel so low today?
I trust that if I kneel and pray,
my sincere appeal for help will convey
high hopes He’ll hold my troubles at bay.
By default, I get off-keel and lose my way,
sigh, and say, “Lord, heal my hurt; dispel my dismay.”


June 28, 2020
Entered in the Triple Rhyme Contest                Placed 2nd
Sponsor: Beth Evans

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Aditi Mishra July 15, 2020 at 2:21 PM Loved this delightful muse of hope and faith Janice. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :) Janice Canerdy July 16, 2020 at 7:24 AM Thank you so much, Aditi. Janice

James Inman July 13, 2020 at 7:17 PM Enjoyed reading your lovely poem Janice. Janice Canerdy July 14, 2020 at 7:52 AM Thanks so much, James. Janice

Eric Cohen July 11, 2020 at 2:45 PM Congrats, Janice. This form is difficult but you made a coherent message flow with feeling to the end. Janice Canerdy July 14, 2020 at 7:53 AM Eric, thank you for this wonderful comment. Janice

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2020 at 1:48 PM This is a very good write in that form he gave us, Janice. Congrats for your win. Janice Canerdy July 11, 2020 at 2:02 PM Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice

Winged Warrior July 11, 2020 at 11:54 AM Congrats!! dear friend on your win...well crafted Janice...love & hugs...^WW^ :o) Janice Canerdy July 11, 2020 at 12:29 PM Thanks a million, WW! Janice

William Kelii Kekaula July 11, 2020 at 8:57 AM Witty indeed, Janice, I truly love it and my compliments on your placement -- Aloha~@William

Jenna Logan July 11, 2020 at 8:22 AM Congratulations on your winning lines of faith, Janice. Janice Canerdy July 11, 2020 at 8:47 AM Thank you so much, Jenna. Janice

John Watt July 4, 2020 at 7:44 PM Janice, you tackled this difficult challenge well, and ended with a comforting message of faith and trust in God. I hope this does well in the contest ~ John Janice Canerdy July 4, 2020 at 8:50 PM Thanks so much, John! This one was a real challenge. Janice

Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 7:12 AM These triple rhymes look so hard to execute--you did well, Janice, within a divine message and a prayer. Janice Canerdy June 29, 2020 at 8:05 AM Vijay, I really worked on this one. As Beth said, opening rhymes are the hardest! Thanks so much. Janice