He Perks Me Up

When the day is long and filled with hurt
I lay in my bed and remember things that make my lips perk
Like today I spilled hot water across my hand
I remember the time when he bought me that red head band
he said it would look lovely in my dark curly locks
but I thought it looked ugly and I pushed it and mocked
with a quick trick hug, he put it on my head
and when I looked in the mirror my heart had to dread
cause as I looked at myself and I saw him behind me
he was so amused that I looked silly, that he had tried to blind me
with his cute big lips that bared his admiring smile
I couldn't remove that, so I kept that stupid head band on for a while
so there I laid in my bed all covered and spread
and the hurt from my hand had started to fled
that I had to smirk to myself about the past
cause I think without him, I'd probably wouldn't have last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/6/2010 11:40:00 AM
I enjoyed that, thanks, Susan
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Date: 3/6/2010 9:29:00 AM
men and their smiles!!! a wonder of the world! Light & Love
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Date: 3/3/2010 4:08:00 PM
Sounds like a big-time crush he had for you, Jessica! Boys always seem to tease the girls they like most. Enjoyed this remembrance; brought me back to happy childhood days. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/3/2010 2:39:00 PM
Very touching write about your love. I am sure that the desire of everyone's heart would be to love and be loved as you have written here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my write "The Angel" ...I have gone back and added the other six lines...They seem to have completed the write. Sara
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