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Below is the poem entitled HE NEVER KEPT HIS PROMISE which was written by poet PoeticMonwa Monwa. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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He told her he loves her
He told her he will forever love her
Promised her the world
Promised her all that was precious
All that was beyond beautiful
The lady fell for his charms
Threw herself in his arms
She thought she has found her eternal joy
But the guy was not yet a man but a young boy
He listened not to his heart but other men
He started looking at other women
He forgot about the one he promised the  world
To him love was just a meaningless word
He used to be the man of prayer
All that perished, he became a player
A heartbreaker
A troublemaker
I saw tears on a girl falling
Her calls getting cancelled when she's calling
She became more like a reserve
That kind of treatment, she really didn't deserve
I have lately seen her
When I look into her eyes I can still see and feel her pain
I'm scared to say sorry because that would just bring back that pain again
Peace she will never find
This will forever stick in her mind
When I see the guy, he is remorseful
He admits he was a fool
Well he blew his chance
He opened the music, he must now for it dance


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