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He Loves Me So

Saffron petals, plucked rhythmically Until a single petal remains attached Not the answer I desire, so I move on Find the next flower in the garden Loves me yes, loves me not Over and over until the last one stands tall Whimsically revealing, he loves me so Elated, I skip through the golden field Rejoicing in my youthful fantasy Sunflower Poetry Contest Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudhury 05/20/2021

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/1/2021 8:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. It's a beautiful poem ~ Mala

Avery Won
Date: 6/1/2021 9:02:00 AM

Thank you, Mala!

Terry Flood

Date: 6/1/2021 2:41:00 AM

I tried that once using clover leaves, she loves me, she loves me not, she loves me... yippee, oh no, it’s a four leaf clover. Just my luck. Smashing poem, Avery Won. Congratulations. Terry

Avery Won
Date: 6/1/2021 4:40:00 AM

Haha nice - thanks Terry!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/31/2021 11:19:00 PM

A Beautiful Poem. Congratulations!

Avery Won
Date: 6/1/2021 4:40:00 AM

Thank you so much!

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/31/2021 6:23:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Avery Won
Date: 6/1/2021 4:40:00 AM

Thank you, Beata